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Re: Parallels Server supports OSX Server as Guest OS




On 10 maj 2008, at 20.37, Greg Shenaut wrote:

I wonder if it would help Apple to convince people to follow the provisions of their EULA if it were written better.

I started out by looking at the document here <http://images.apple.com/legal/sla/docs/macosxserver105.pdf > because I was wondering how they had defined "copy".

In effect, they don't define the word. However, once you start looking at the words in the document, you can see just how poorly it is written.

One critical example is:

This License allows you to install and use one copy of the Mac OS X Server software (the “Mac OS X Server Software”) on a single Apple- labeled computer.

Note that here they define the phrase "Mac OS X Server Software" as either "one copy of the Mac OS X Server software" or simply as "Mac OS X Server software", it is not clear which one they mean. In the latter case, the definition differs from its meaning only in the case of the ess in software. And yet, in the next couple few sentences, we see this phrase, with the capital ess, used in the phrase


They define: Mac OS X Server software => Mac OS X Server Software.

The word 'the' is a reference point and the double quotes marks the part that actually is defined.

You see the resemblence here:
(the "Mac OS X Server Software")
the Mac OS X Server software

The unquoted 'the' is the common word so it is fairly clear to see the exact wordings of the definition. I don't say it is bullet proof, but as I see it it would be hard to argue about it and claim that the 'one copy' part could be a part in the definition. It is not syntactilly justified since with the parantesis which includes unqoted and quoted parts in combination with the striking resemblence of the original and the new definition.

John Stalberg
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