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Re: Learning Web Objects with Wiki
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Re: Learning Web Objects with Wiki


  • Subject: Re: Learning Web Objects with Wiki
  • From: Ray Ackland <email@hidden>
  • Date: Fri, 30 Sep 2005 13:50:09 +1200

Jake,

Had a look at the page you placed there. While I think it's good, I expect you are after some constructive criticism as well.

Starting with a simple item, there is a spelling mistake (wierd), but if I was so motivated I could fix that directly ;).

On a more general level, the tone of the chapter does feel that it is more a talk than a textbook. I expect this is a result of it coming from a workshop direction. While this isn't bad in itself, IMHO it means that your personality is reflected in the writing which can make chapters by other people difficult to maintain consistency.

But who am I to critique others when I haven't contributed myself?

r

On 30/09/2005, at 13:25 , Jake MacMullin wrote:

Anyway, I've contributed some stuff that I had written for an introductory WebObjects workshop - I'm not sure if it is too basic. If anyone wants to give me some feedback - or edit the stuff I've written that'd be great.

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